Testimonials
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I've always been a bit skeptical about the testimonials seen on many consultant's web sites, but I realize that I'm not known to everyone, and that they might help introduce you to what I do. Here are a few from clients of mine. I hope you find them informative, but I hope you'll also review the information about me in the Books I've Edited and Resume pages linked to above.
From a small press I've been working with for years:
"Harold Underdown has been
a key success factor in our company's publishing project since day one.
Our mission is to reissue a classic series of children's biographical fiction
that was first published more than 50 years ago. Harold has edited each
one of our current 6 books and done a remarkable job in retaining the flavor
of the original text while making it more readable for today's children.
Two of our books have won national awards, and Harold has played a huge
part in achieving that level of excellence. He is a delight to work with,
meets deadlines, and is a professional in every sense of the word. I recommend
him highly."
-- Florrie Binford Kichler, President,
Patria Press, Inc.
From a published novelist:
"Harold Underdown provided a specific, succinct, and highly useful critique of my manuscript after I'd taken it as far as I felt I could on my own. He pointed out weaknesses in the plot, characters that needed more fleshing out and more empathy, and opportunities to strengthen themes, all for a reasonable fee. His feedback was invaluable to me in taking my writing--not just that manuscript--to the next level. I'd recommend his service to all writers who are serious about improving their craft."
--Christine MacLean, author of How It's Done, a Book Sense Pick.
From a self-publisher:
"Harold's detailed
critique of my original manuscript gave me the necessary tools to enhance
my plot and refine my characters. His comments and ideas were refreshing
and intelligently presented. I was able to look at all elements from a different
angle, which brought new life to my creative energy (and to the story).
Harold's extensive experience in children's book publishing is a huge plus
and has been a valuable resource for me. With a big thanks to Harold, my
first novel for children was published."
--Karen Yoder
Author of Fire Kids! The Adventures of Hose Company No. 2
From a picture book writer, who sent me a dozen manuscripts:
"I contacted
Harold Underdown regarding his editorial services because I wanted an honest
opinion from someone within the business regarding the marketability of
my work. I wanted to know which of my manuscripts I should focus on and
which should be set aside. Not only did help me in that respect, but he
also gave me valuable information on why some of my manuscripts were not
working. He pointed out things I needed to consider changing, and why; things
I hadn't read in books -- or maybe I had read the information but didn't
understand it until it was related to my own writing. Since his review,
my writing has become much more focused and after using the suggestions
he provided on one of my manuscripts, I was able to find an agent to represent
it."
--Kristi Corbett
From a recent thank-you note for a critique of a fantasy novel:
"Thank you
for the insightful critique of my manuscript. I agreed with all of your
comments, and was amazed by your thoroughness. I can see I have my work
cut out for me, but now I'll know what direction to go--thanks to you."
--Rebecca Strabo